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Yanxbr

Darkness is nothing to be feared
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Hey guys, I'm a self-trained manga artist. If I'm any good, it's up to you. I've come a long way since I've started drawing and i want others to see that progress as well. I'm on youtube, go check it out!
this website sucks, im moving to pixiv https://pixiv.me/yanxbr
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Well I'm back, finally! i was discouraged from continuing my manga cause it was obvious that my skill level was low.  I've been practicing with fan art though so finally i feel good enough to keep going! i really hope i can finally get more publicity on this and be successful.  hope you bros keep reading!
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Fake Friends

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There are some people who are getting too fake here on dA. They only want posts, comments, or to see how many friends they can get. So let's see who will actually re-post this. This is a test to see who's paying attention. This is a test to see how many people in my friends list actually pay attention. Copy and re-post in your own bulletin. Lets see who the true friends are... Re-post this if you are a friend... Don't reply... Just copy and paste this in a new journal as "Fake Friends."
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Hey, man, I did a digital drawing of your Titan as a thank-you gift for an awesome time yesterday. You can see it on profile here.
Looks like I was able to find another mangaka that uses pencils for his manga.

I've read your manga up to the last page you uploaded, and I have to admit, a very clever story you got going on here. Dialogue is nice and readable and the grammar is acceptable (no confusion whatsoever). The organization is certainly well done. THOUGH I had to go back from one page to another here and there making sure I'm reading it in the correct order. And the use of basics is quite noticeable.

The only thing I suggest (and this is only my opinion. No need to take it if you don't want to) is provide links in the descriptions on and for each page. And I would advise you to do this as soon as possible before it becomes too hectic to do so (trust me, I know).

Also, you are actually the FIRST deviant-manga artist I've seen yet that uses the point-perspective method. You don't know how many traditional mangakas I've seen that don't use that method for their scenery/backgrounds. BUT I've noticed that you don't use it for ALL your panels (why is that, out of curiosity? no need to answer if you don't want to). I would highly advise to use it throughout. Once so, your manga would definitely look a lot more....how should I say it...not nicer since it's already nice-looking but...more proportionally-correct, I guess(?).

And finally, your anatomy is decent. Can use a bit more work (sorry if that sounded too harsh UNLESS this is a style you're aiming then PLEASE ignore this part of the comment) but it's decent.

Overall, nice manga, great dialogue, easy to follow, and clean. Keep working on it!!!!!!!! :thumbsup: :D And while I'm at it, here's a :+devwatch:! Enjoy...
Hey there, sorry I'm replying so late. School is fun -_-'
I really appreciate the criticism, since I'm really just starting to draw. I've tried to make sure the flow of the story is obvious to readers but truthfully, the links to the pages idea had never crossed my mind, and I thank you for the idea.
I'm in the Drafting class this year at my school so it's only been recently since I started using the point perspective methods. It's still new to me and I'm still practicing it, so it may not be everywhere. Thanks for noticing it though, cause that can be real hard ^^.
As I said before, I'm only just starting out so my anatomy may not be spot on. I just recently bought an anatomy study book so that i can start studying the body a little closer.

Again, thank you for the criticism, it's greatly appreciate. I hope you can continue to read my manga
No prob! :D I'm always happy to help out a fellow mangaka! And sure thing, I'll make sure to keep reading you next upcoming pages. Keep up the good work, my friend!

PS: If you can, check out my manga give me back a little feedback. I can really use some. But, you don't have to if you don't wanna. Don't wanna sound desperate.
it's cool, I'll check it out later!
Thanks for the fav
Thanks for the fav